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Finaly done: Team Attack 1-2

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Alex_Dynamite
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Finaly done: Team Attack 1-2

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It was already done a little while ago, but I was thinking about what do do with it. I have decided to turn it into a weekly strip, alongside my SuperUltraMega comic. I am starting by sharing the current comic one page at a time. This will also give me time to prepare the next story.
The other thing I have been thinking about is having the team available to 'hire'. Essentialy, I will colaberate with other artists that need some temporary characters. What do you think of this idea?

For more information and the story, visit:
https://alexonnet.cwaboard.co.uk/teamattack.html

Also, I apologize for the color and such; i was experimenting again. I'm going to stop that and just do what I already know and enjoy.
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Re: Finaly done: Team Attack 1-2

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Hey that was pretty cool Alex.

Yeah, I'd keep away from using color pencils. They lose the subtle colors when scanned and tend to look like crayon.

Not to be too critical, but I think you could work on making the females a little more feminine. I'm not saying add big boobs and tiny waists (though I wouldn't be opposed :tongue: ) but the faces could be more girlish; weaker chins, smaller noses etc.

Looking forward to next issue!
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Re: Finaly done: Team Attack 1-2

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Thanks, Coffeecup for replying and for the constructive criticism! Inspite of how slow it has become here, its still the best place (well, most likely) to get comments.
I took your advice and made a few small changes. The images on my site have been updated. I do admit, I have been rather cautious with drawing them. Don't get me wrong, I like curvy ladies too, its just that I did not make this for that purpose and did not want it to be mistaken as, hence me being overly cautious. I'm realizing that I need to loosen up a bit.

Not to worry about the color pencils, that was due to a past problem I have since fixed. I'm going for what I did in the profile pictures and that G.A.S. preview.
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